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Erin's Song
by Mary Elder-Criss
01/14/04
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Erin’s Song
By: Mary Elder-Criss

I look at you, light shining from your gray-green eyes,
and I long to be a better person.
Your little hand snuggles closely in mine,
as you bow your head in prayer,
soft silky hair, shining in the moonlight,
and I swallow hard to dissolve
the lump that appears
in my throat.

Impish grin and freckled nose, missing front tooth,
you are indeed one of God’s miracles.
I brought you forth in blood and pain,
but it all disappeared into
absolute joy the minute I saw you.
You have given new life to a heart
that was withered,
you are my example of all that is good.

Selfishly, I wish I could hold back the hands of time,
and keep you at this moment,
Eight years old now, and growing so quickly,
soon you won’t need me as much.
I tiptoe in your room, brush your tousled hair
back from your brow, and kiss you while
you are sleeping.
Sweet dreams, little one.
You are the song of my heart.


Copyright © 2004

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Barbara Thompson-Young 25 Aug 2004
Wow! This is beautiful and moving. The memories it has stirred-up in me! Thank you for writing it. God bless you.




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