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yarra wrote:Here's my attempt at using some more creative rhymes:
A whistling wind blew errant leaves
through the garden, in the eaves.
It's aim was making menace.
The trees withstood with grimace,
letting go their dignity
for the autumn symphony.
I don't like poetry where people bend language to sound unnatural so that it fits in with the rhyming pattern. Here's an example I'm making up now:
The sight before her struck her dumb
And from her mouth a scream did come.
No-one speaks like that saying, 'From her mouth a scream did come' unless it's meant to sound funny. Is that what you mean by not using usual language syntax?
Cinnamon Bear wrote:Regarding unusual language syntax:
My recent entry for "Bestie", utilizes not only unusual syntax, but also archaic words:
I can only surmise that one or both of the following is true:
1) If I hadn't utilized these devices, I would have placed 1st in E. C. instead of 3rd--okay will maybe 2nd.
2) For this type of poem, unusual syntax and archaic words are acceptable.
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