And for no cost at all there are Jan's Writing basics; which I see you have already requested. Jan will get round to that shortly.
If you are serious about wanting to improve, join a buddy group and really open up to Red Ink. Let everyone know that you want constructive critisicm and keep chasing it. There are masters of the craft here and their personal help will be invaluable. And don't be afraid to message them and ask for clarity. Short testimony.
Jan once commented on my article that I needed more 'structure', I messaged and asked what she meant. Through two or three emails she gave me a wonderful lesson on structure and my writing leaped forward almost over night. Most, if not all, writers here are very approachable.
May we all get eyes to see and ears to hear,
A Revelation of His Word, crystal clear.
Admitting our need to be drawn in,
Less of self, more of Him.
My prayer for us all.
God bless us with the Revelation of His Word, Grahamhttp://www.shekinahcloud.com/page/page/8464330.htm