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I'm seeking input on my essay "Christians, positive thinking, and prayer." I am venturing into the realm of blog writing and essay writing. Your thoughts on style, readability, and unity are especially appreciated. The link to the article is here:http://www.faithwriters.com/article-det ... ?id=162890
Thanks in advance for your input.
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I thought the piece was nicely executed. I like how you place teaching with analogies and some storytelling. You also looked to cover various aspects of your topic, which is always a plus with me, being the detailed gal I am.
Thanks for sharing.
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs
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