I like it. The last line about freedom of speech is such a great thought-provoker to end on! Of course, I know you don't want to get rid of freedom of speech. but it really makes one stop and think about all the stupid things that have been send or done in the quest for freedom of speech.
I have poems that I wrote years ago and each time I take them out, I'll tweak them a bit thinking that it flows better this way or the rhythm is better that way. Like most writings, I think you can never be completely finished with a piece. I am tone deaf and have to count out the syllables on my fingers and can't hear the stressed, unstressed patterns so I can't give you any feedback on that. I did notice you chose not to use punctuation and I understand that is a style choice, but I wonder if some lines might flow better with a comma like : Our tongue, a small portion, I also saw that you used the word Than and I think you may have meant: Then with words, we blow up
Overall i think it is a powerful piece and one that will really make the reader stop and think. You definitely have a gift! Thank you for sharing it with me.
Sometimes God calms the storm; Sometimes He lets the storm rage and calms His child