I had to laugh when I read this because I have been doing more editing today when I ran across the times I used, "Sarah thought to herself". I caught that and said to myself that of course it was to herself. Just say, "Sarah thought". Now here it is. How funny.
I'm a detailed gal and do have to watch that, and similar situations.
Thanks for the info on the quotes within a quote. Been a long time since I've been in school but thought that was how I learned it, and will look to make use of your suggestion on rephrasing.
Seeing your knowledge and the value of your expertise I now hope to get your opinion on something else, or anyone else that may have feedback for that matter.
I'll put it on a separate thread so others that may need help there can find it within the title displayed.
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs