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Good Morning Jan! (Juuuuuuuuuuuust kidding)
These are two separate passages, from one article I am working on.
I'm stumped on them both.
“Fire! Our house is on fire. John, Kimberly, wake up!”
Not seeing anything unusual, I became irritated and turned toward the two beings. “What is it you want me to see? There’s nothing here!”
AnnRene, these are fine. Exclamation points in dialog--especially in high emotion situations like that--are absolutely fine.
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