Okay, Allison, those are cute!
Now write one about a famous person. I know, I know, you'll be famous some day. But for now...pick someone else.
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Thanks for the background, Kevin!colin_nielsen wrote:Okay: how about this one then.
This one's for our good ole prime minister Kevin Rudd. Here's a bit of backstory: he had a hissy fit because the air force plane he was flying didn't have the kind of food he wanted. He ended up threatening a stewardess and reducing her to tears.
Good ole Kevin
Became prime minister in 07
He's jolly in public when seen
but get him alone and he's angry and mean.
This one's a good one.
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Freeing? *giggle*
I feel like I'm supposed to hop on one foot backwards with my eyes closed instead of skipping along to the tune in my head.
I know...I know...It's good for me to try something new! *SMILE*
Here's another one for practice:
President Ronald Reagan
A lot of grief has taken
But he stood his ground with a stiff upper lipper
For the Gipper.
I feel like I'm supposed to hop on one foot backwards with my eyes closed instead of skipping along to the tune in my head.
I know...I know...It's good for me to try something new! *SMILE*
Here's another one for practice:
President Ronald Reagan
A lot of grief has taken
But he stood his ground with a stiff upper lipper
For the Gipper.
There you go, Yvonne! Love that last line.
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I don't like having to say something in rhyme. Here's my poor attempt. Is this a forced rhyme or just bad grammar?
Richard Simmons
Is loved by the womens
Who shake their booties
Because he tells them they can be beauties
Phee
Richard Simmons
Is loved by the womens
Who shake their booties
Because he tells them they can be beauties
Phee
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Big old Goliath
Was not quite a behemoth
David found a little rock
And gave him quite a nasty shock
Is there any rule about capitalizataion at the beginning of a line, even though it isn't a new sentence?
Was not quite a behemoth
David found a little rock
And gave him quite a nasty shock
Is there any rule about capitalizataion at the beginning of a line, even though it isn't a new sentence?
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I am offering proof that this type of poetry is way above my head and skill level:
(I am using this first one because I am famous in my own family.)
Gerald D. Shuler
Uses a ruler
For writing in meter...
But clarihews are definately sweeter.
Job
Doesn't rhyme with rob, but robe.
Does it matter, anyway?
He's not alive today.
another:
Sir Lancelot
got caught
with Gweneviere.
Oh, Dear.
Or how about this for an improvement?
Sir Lancelot
surely thought he'd not get caught
but this news was a blast
that traveled fast.
(I am using this first one because I am famous in my own family.)
Gerald D. Shuler
Uses a ruler
For writing in meter...
But clarihews are definately sweeter.
Job
Doesn't rhyme with rob, but robe.
Does it matter, anyway?
He's not alive today.
another:
Sir Lancelot
got caught
with Gweneviere.
Oh, Dear.
Or how about this for an improvement?
Sir Lancelot
surely thought he'd not get caught
but this news was a blast
that traveled fast.
I had something really memorable to write here but I forgot what it was.
Gerald Shuler
Gerald Shuler
Oh, fun!! I’ve seen this type of poem before, but I didn’t know the technical name for it. Since “pointed political commentary” was disallowed, I admirably restrained my first impulse (Let’s see... what rhymes with “Obama”... or better yet, "Pelosi"?).
So here’s one for my little guy:
Simon Gabriel Slider
Fears spiders.
He loves roly-polies and garden slugs–
Just don’t call them “bugs.”
And here’s my “famous person” attempt:
Maurice Ravel
How many know him well?
His popular appeal would be quite narrow
If not for Bolero.
Carol S.
So here’s one for my little guy:
Simon Gabriel Slider
Fears spiders.
He loves roly-polies and garden slugs–
Just don’t call them “bugs.”
And here’s my “famous person” attempt:
Maurice Ravel
How many know him well?
His popular appeal would be quite narrow
If not for Bolero.
Carol S.
Carol S.
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Okay then ...
Babe Ruth
had a bad, rotten tooth
It made him swing and miss
So he went to the dentist
Al Capone
they said, was bad to the bone
Until they found his tax
and was sentenced to the max
Albert Einstein
was not given to the wiles of white wine
But, he did like a cabernet sauvignon in the vacinity
when he was studying relativity
Beethoven
was best known for composin'
but few actually knew
in liked the zebras at the zoo
Dr. Suess
wanted to write about a goose
but he was stuck on a tram
and wrote about green eggs and ham
Henry C.
PS Sorry...................
Babe Ruth
had a bad, rotten tooth
It made him swing and miss
So he went to the dentist
Al Capone
they said, was bad to the bone
Until they found his tax
and was sentenced to the max
Albert Einstein
was not given to the wiles of white wine
But, he did like a cabernet sauvignon in the vacinity
when he was studying relativity
Beethoven
was best known for composin'
but few actually knew
in liked the zebras at the zoo
Dr. Suess
wanted to write about a goose
but he was stuck on a tram
and wrote about green eggs and ham
Henry C.
PS Sorry...................
Whatever you do, do it heartily, as to the Lord and not to men,... Col. 3:23
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OK, the first one is for someone who is famous AROUND HERE:
Jan Worgul Ackerson
Makes her Master Class lots of fun.
I really would tip my hat
If it weren’t for all those references to that darn cat.
And now for someone really famous
:
William Henry Harrison
Believed in United States expansion.
But as President, Ol’ Tippecanoe
Died on day thrity-two.
Jan Worgul Ackerson
Makes her Master Class lots of fun.
I really would tip my hat
If it weren’t for all those references to that darn cat.
And now for someone really famous
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William Henry Harrison
Believed in United States expansion.
But as President, Ol’ Tippecanoe
Died on day thrity-two.
Steve
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"When the Round Table is broken every man must follow Galahad or Mordred; middle
things are gone." C.S. Lewis
“The chief purpose of life … is to increase according to our capacity our knowledge of God by all the means we have, and to be moved by it to praise and thanks. To do as we say in the Gloria in Excelsis ... We praise you, we call you holy, we worship you, we proclaim your glory, we thank you for the greatness of your splendor.” J.R.R. Tolkien
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"When the Round Table is broken every man must follow Galahad or Mordred; middle
things are gone." C.S. Lewis
“The chief purpose of life … is to increase according to our capacity our knowledge of God by all the means we have, and to be moved by it to praise and thanks. To do as we say in the Gloria in Excelsis ... We praise you, we call you holy, we worship you, we proclaim your glory, we thank you for the greatness of your splendor.” J.R.R. Tolkien
Phee, I appreciate your stretching yourself!pheeweed wrote:I don't like having to say something in rhyme. Here's my poor attempt. Is this a forced rhyme or just bad grammar?
Richard Simmons
Is loved by the womens
Who shake their booties
Because he tells them they can be beauties
Phee
This fits all of the criteria--except that it doesn't really poke fun at Richard Simmons. It's hard, because it's not in our nature to make fun of people, and we don't want to be mean...but that's the way of the clerihew.
This is awfully clever, though, and I love your Simmons/womens rhyme!
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Oh great, Carol...now you've got that song in my mind...Symphonic wrote:And here’s my “famous person” attempt:
Maurice Ravel
How many know him well?
His popular appeal would be quite narrow
If not for Bolero.
Carol S.
Really clever clerihew! It's just nicer to poke fun at people who are no longer with us, don't you think?
Got any more for us?
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No need to apologize, Henry...ya done good.Kid Denver wrote:Albert Einstein
was not given to the wiles of white wine
But, he did like a cabernet sauvignon in the vacinity
when he was studying relativity
Dr. Suess
wanted to write about a goose
but he was stuck on a tram
and wrote about green eggs and ham
Henry C.
PS Sorry...................
That's pretty painful, isn't it? I LOVE the Einstien one. See, it takes a good poet to be a deliberately bad poet.
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Oh Steven, Steven, Steven...don't be disparaging my cat. She'll get angry...and you don't want to be around Miss Sophie when she's angry.swfdoc1 wrote:OK, the first one is for someone who is famous AROUND HERE:
Jan Worgul Ackerson
Makes her Master Class lots of fun.
I really would tip my hat
If it weren’t for all those references to that darn cat.
And now for someone really famous:
William Henry Harrison
Believed in United States expansion.
But as President, Ol’ Tippecanoe
Died on day thrity-two.
Love the Harrison clerihew, though! Even the "thrity-two".
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Esther this is a really cute clerihew!Esther wrote:Big old Goliath
Was not quite a behemoth
David found a little rock
And gave him quite a nasty shock
Is there any rule about capitalizataion at the beginning of a line, even though it isn't a new sentence?
As in most non-free verse poetry, the first word of each line should be capitlaized. Great question!
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