I'm happy as long as the synopsis isn't as long as a chapter. It's just an overview. So two pages is okay, but possibly verging a little on the long side. 700 words is fine.
The key is to communicate briefly where the story is going so that we can see whether the promise of the first chapter is likely to be fulfilled in the entire story.
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To all those entering, if you don't get a message from me within a day or so to let you know it has been received, could you please check with me? There have been a couple of glitches with the system (mainly to do with file type).
Also, please make sure you save your chapter as either an old version of Word (97-2003 doc) or as Rich Text Format. If you have any problems at all, please let me know and I can help you.
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Also, please make sure you save your chapter as either an old version of Word (97-2003 doc) or as Rich Text Format. If you have any problems at all, please let me know and I can help you.
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Sorry to get so particularBreathFreshAir wrote: The key is to communicate briefly where the story is going so that we can see whether the promise of the first chapter is likely to be fulfilled in the entire story.
So does this mean that it's okay if it's a teaser-type, like you'd see on the back of a book? Or are you looking for a more overview that gives away the ending?
I'm thinking either one is fine, but I wanted to make sure before I submitted mine, which is more the teaser type.
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Either is fine, Rachel. Again, it's really just a case of showing the author knows where the novel is going and is able to give an overview of what the story is about (because the first chapter may not really do that).
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ThreeDee wrote:One further question about the synopsis. Should that part also include your target reader, approximate length, anything like that? Or is is strictly story-based?
I'd really like to know too.
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If you are targeting kids or young adults, then yes, it would probably be a good idea to make a note of that in the synopsis. Not worried about the approximate length.
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Deb, I tried sending you a couple of e-mails this past week. The one to the address from a couple of years ago bounced, and never heard anything from the new address that I found on your web page. Did it get through okay?
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I find myself somewhat confused as to the previously published claus.
If it was published with FW (anthology or otherwise), but expanded; on a blog, but revised; is this disqualifying?
If it was published with FW (anthology or otherwise), but expanded; on a blog, but revised; is this disqualifying?
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Dear me, Karlene, you are overthinking things.
Has the whole thing been published in a book? If it hasn't, go for it.
Rick, I've had to get rid of my office email address for Finesse. It was being used to spam me, but even worse, being spoofed to spam others. So I'll send you an email with my new email address.
(The one on my Breath of Fresh Air website is spammed to the max. I don't even check it these days--just delete things. I've got to get in and change all the references to my email address, but have a form set up to replace it.)
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Has the whole thing been published in a book? If it hasn't, go for it.
Rick, I've had to get rid of my office email address for Finesse. It was being used to spam me, but even worse, being spoofed to spam others. So I'll send you an email with my new email address.
(The one on my Breath of Fresh Air website is spammed to the max. I don't even check it these days--just delete things. I've got to get in and change all the references to my email address, but have a form set up to replace it.)
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Thank you Deb. I'll be ok. I'm sure someday I will.
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Hey Deb, Don't mean to be a pain, but I've sent two PMs but haven't heard back. You said to let you know if we hadn't heard anything in a couple days after submitting our entry. I think I submitted it 5 or 6 days ago. Is there some way to check if it got through. I know you are really busy. I'm really not trying to be pushy. It's OK, I'll wait to hear from you whenever you can. There's still plenty of time to submit it again if for some reason it didn't go through.
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Ruth Ann
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