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Postby srashmi » Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:27 pm

In A Bouquet of Solace, I used alliteration, assonance, and consonance within a story to create mood.

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Postby Pat » Wed Apr 30, 2008 1:08 pm

I'm with you May. I love to write it and I'm just learning too.

Jan's classes have been the best! (Hey Jan ... just put that on my bill) :mrgreen:

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Postby mayflowers » Wed Apr 30, 2008 1:28 pm

BTW, the chocolates in the mail. :mrgreen:
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Postby glorybee » Wed Apr 30, 2008 1:28 pm

mayflowers wrote:BTW, the chocolates in the mail. :mrgreen:

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Postby yvonne » Thu May 01, 2008 9:23 am

mayflowers wrote:Thank you Jan, you posted while I was posting so I missed what you said at first.

I was meaning can a word---say Staggering---when broken it could hold
s--for alliteration gg for consonance and ing or ring or ng for consonance and alliteration?--Think I just confused myself :heehee

May, I think you have a great ear for poetry! And "yes" I think you can use all three ....maybe not easily, but they can be woven in and out of your lines.

(I don't want to give up my 'ing' words. They have such wonderful flow and sound and action! No...No..No... Don't take them away! ) :o


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