jodiebanner wrote:WHY CAN'T I DO THIS?
Why is it I try to write,
But my mind is so uptight,
I can't find the rhyme
That fits just right.
Sad attempt but I keep rhyming everything, I'll have to keep practicing this.
Not a sad attempt at all, Jodie--you got it exactly right this time--I, try, write, my, mind, find, right....every one of those words has the same vowel sound. And it's perfectly fine if some of them also rhyme.
Jodie, the new Assonance Queen. Too bad that doesn't sound, I dunno, nicer.