by brokenpencil » Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:19 am
Dear Jan,
Hope your doing great, I have a question on a poem I wrote when I was thinking of all the headack I have given my mother. I Love her so much and we even have the same intituals. I did make her mad lots of times. so I started with Mad: Mom AKA Dread. I was in a poetry form and a person there told me this is a double acrostic. Your help will be greatly appreciated. Go slow with this new student for I'm brokenpencil.
sincerly Benny Diaz even though i tried to make a funny
Where Is Superman?
The world seems to need a real superman and how.
God’s plan is for man to spread love around now.
You will be the hero where ever you go.
Long as you don’t be hating, love is what you show.
Benny Diaz 9/10/08
