brown seed planted deep
green leaves reach up for the breeze
red flower dances
Lisa J.
Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
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haiku #3
tired nurse needs to sleep
too many haiku in head
pillow calls my name
Lisa J.
too many haiku in head
pillow calls my name
Lisa J.
I don't know what my future holds... but I know WHO holds my future...and "I'm persuaded that HE is able to keep that which I've committed unto HIM against that day".
Re: haiku try
LOL! I love this! Off to have a Diet Coke now.lidijo1 wrote:so many mentions
of soft drink preferences
making me thirsty
Lisa J.
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another haiku from me to you
little black puppy
red Christmas bow around neck
small boy's new best friend
Lisa J.
red Christmas bow around neck
small boy's new best friend
Lisa J.
I don't know what my future holds... but I know WHO holds my future...and "I'm persuaded that HE is able to keep that which I've committed unto HIM against that day".
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what... another one???
what now have I done
cannot stop thinking haiku
created monster
seriously, Jan... I'm moving on to the next lesson
Lisa J.
cannot stop thinking haiku
created monster
seriously, Jan... I'm moving on to the next lesson
Lisa J.
I don't know what my future holds... but I know WHO holds my future...and "I'm persuaded that HE is able to keep that which I've committed unto HIM against that day".
Lisa, you made me laugh!
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