These lessons, by one of our most consistent FaithWriters' Challenge Champions, should not be missed. So we're making a permanent home for them here.
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by glorybee » Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:26 am
Joanney, that piece is amazing! Your first sentence really grabbed me, and I enjoyed your feat of writing the whole thing without A.
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by glorybee » Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:54 am
Leah, that poem is both hilarious, and in a way, nightmarish! I'd have given up on the burgers, gone inside and had a bowl of ice cream.
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