Throw a Brick for NOTE

[Deb Porter]

Hi Challengeers.

The final tally has been done, and we have our winners for the week. So, if you had an entry in for the NOTE Challenge, now is the time to point a few more readers your way (as well as read some other great entries). It's time to "throw a brick" straight to your entry (what a great way to get your week started).

All you have to do is reply to this post with a direct link to your entry. If you aren't sure how to do that, we have a guide to help you here:

How to Post a Link to Your Entry

If you would appreciate some constructive critique on your entry, please say RED INK WELCOME when you "throw your brick."

If you join in the brick throwing fun, please make sure you read and review the other brick throwers' entries as well. (There's a lot of good reading in there.)

(As always, if you would like a sample rating sheet to use when reading entries, please see this discussion: viewtopic.php?f=22&t=33906 )

Have fun!

Love, Deb

[CherylHarrison]

My entry can be found at http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44935.

Thanks so much for your comments. Red ink welcome.

Have a blessed week.

[Heartsinger]

I'll toss one in this week

http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44914

Red ink always welcome

[rtodd5011]

http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44902

This is my first fiction writing. I sure hope you enjoy and are blessed!

[Colswann1]

Hi, pink ink I think!

The 'Note Well' Proverbs

[Susannajm]

Hi all,

Here's my brick: http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44937.

Thanks for your comments in advance and yes, red ink is welcome.

Psallm 20:7 Some trust in chariots, and some in horses: but we will remember the name of the LORD our God.

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[tomoral]

I struggled with this one so please be kind and use pink ink instead of red.lol Just kidding

So Here's my struggled brick

A Note And A Prayer


http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44881

Level 3

[oznoel]

My entry is one of those ideas that bubbles along in the back of your mind until suddenly it surfaces. I hope it's a blessing to you all.

http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44915

Noel

[DizziDanni]

Mornin' all. Here is my brick.

http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44903

THE RED STUFF please 'cos it makes me happy.

[Connie]

Hi All.
My link is http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44897
and I would appreciate comments, particularly red ink! This is one of those entries where I knew where I was going but I am not sure if its clear to those reading it!! This true story spoke to my heart when I first read it and I wanted to share it! In anticipation, thanks for your comments.
Margaret

[judi]

http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44861

RED INK WELCOME! Please always feel free to red pencil my "stuff"! Critiquing mineself after reading so many excellent entries, methinks that I misunderstood the "Note"!

Weighty Watching

Please dear kind someone, please read my poems -
not just to critique, but enjoy, sit and think.
I know I write often, and some are like tomes,
but I cannot stop them - my mind seeks to link

with someone who's been there, done that and so
can offer me feedback that's beyond mere praise.
My thoughts are just flying, my fingers too slow
to just tap on the keys for the rest of my days.

Outside the sun beckons, my dog wants to play.
My lazy form wants to just sit here and enter
what's sometimes just drivel - ofttimes I pray
that other activities would help me to center

on just washing dishes, or sweeping a floor -
chores that I willingly shirked way back then...
But I found this website, which cries to me more.
I no longer can focus 'cept with paper and pen.

I'll sit here for hours, inert and expecting
to find you before me - critiquing and reading
my heart baring entries. And find that instead
it's not only just me that must needs be fed.

This constant pulling- think a robin with worm!
And so, being patient, I slink off to dust
my books and my tables - then slowly I turn...
my computer needs dusting! And again I must

look once more through my listing and so hope to find
that you've had enough time to critique my grand works?
And much later I rise to finish dusting - my mind
pressing me upward and onward, ignoring what lurks

on the fringes - the calling - the desperate need
to return to my keyboard and search once again
to see if a kind soul my warped ego did feed.
But no one has read me and I sigh once again.

Eureka! A light dawns above this dim brain!
Why haven't you read all my wonderful poems?
If I critiqued yours, would we possibly gain
some free time to look into each other's domes?

[jerseygirl]

This one was very special and personal for me. I am excited about what you all have to say because you are in many ways another of God's love notes to me. http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44917

[lish1936]

Hi, pink ink I think!

The 'Note Well' Proverbs

Love your rhyming.


Lillian

[Fullheart]

I am hesitant to toss this piece of baked clay as it is not one of my better entry's. I even left an important word out of a scripture reference--oops. This is a true account shared with me by one of my teaching mentees. I decided to write it from his POV. I think it gives us a perspective of the different ways God can deal with us as individuals, though the laws of the Spirit are common to all.
It's also an honest concession that none of us are yet perfect. http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44862

[RuthAnnCC]

My story is at http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article- ... p?id=44925

So is the kiss too much for FW now? I wrote a story a very long time ago with 2 kisses in it - under the romance genre and it was featured in the showcase. This isn't my best story so not worried about getting great comments but I did wonder if, considering how conservative we've become, this might be a bit too much. I kept it light. Anyway, what do you think? Thanks for looking.