I really appreciate these challenges, they have helped me to improve my writing no end. But I also need to thank two other folk who deserve this 1st place ribbon every bit as much as I do; and of course first and foremost I must thank Dad and my wife Giovanna.
Dave Walker is a brilliant writing buddy who never fails to tell me the truth when I need to hear it. Although very encouraging he is also very honest and not afraid to be constructively critical. thanks, Dave.
And Jan, glory be she is an awesome teacher, of Jan's writing basics, viewforum.php?f=67
. the lessons she gave me on structure and transitions played a very large part in bringing this piece together. Thanks, Jan.
Blessings and thanks to all, Graham.
May we all get eyes to see and ears to hear,
A Revelation of His Word, crystal clear.
Admitting our need to be drawn in,
Less of self, more of Him.
My prayer for us all.
God bless us with the Revelation of His Word, Grahamhttp://www.shekinahcloud.com/page/page/8464330.htm