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The Universe - a poem

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The Universe - a poem

Postby shradnikov » Sat Jul 05, 2014 6:48 am

This cosmos is a bloom-
ing Gumamela flower;
Its energy's assum-
ing scent of musing power.

The pollengrains were pla-
nets, 'round the sun revolving.
Each petal is a Ga-
laxy, too vast astounding.

Love was this flower's nec-
tar to God who's ever hungry.
A human intellec-
tual sense can't grasp a Calv'ry.

He picked this flower up
Since from Earth's fine creation.
Its mercy interrup-
ting, we fall down in motion.

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Re: The Universe - a poem

Postby deejay » Sat Jul 05, 2014 4:32 pm

Interesting rythym, very nice poem. Well put.

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Re: The Universe - a poem

Postby Shann » Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:49 am

This does stand out and the words touch my heart.
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Re: The Universe - a poem

Postby shradnikov » Mon Jul 07, 2014 11:07 pm

Thanks for reading and the compliments. :thankssign


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