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A place to discuss poetry in all its wonderful forms and styles. Feel free to share your poetry here.

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Challenge Reject

Postby JCinmyheart » Tue Jan 22, 2013 3:47 pm

I was going to use a poem for the "Rest" topic in the Writing Challenge, but realized it was not a worthy contendor. So I decided to post it here. (not my usual type of poetry)

Day Seven

Six long days of toil and sweat
No work we shirk to draw our check

Swinging hammers, keeping house
Creating things and thinking
Talking, listening, counsel a spouse
Sing to keep a heart from sinking

Some are teachers, others preachers
Doctors and lawyers too
Entertain those in the bleachers
Or take care of critters at the zoo

A chef for foods, a shrink for moods
No single job is best
Yet big or small in common have all
The need for a day of rest

All days at the end of sevens
If we hope to be our best
Honor God who made the heavens
And blessed our day of rest

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Re: Challenge Reject

Postby Shann » Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:13 pm

I think this is cute. I like the light feeling to it. It left me with a smile. I know you were looking for a challenge buddy, if you haven't found one, feel free to send me a PM.
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