Jan,
I think I'm confused. You mentioned Ann's Jots and Titles next door, so I went to Ann's Grammar basics. Saw that she posted on March 4th, but didn't find any replys.
Am I missing something?
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- Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:54 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
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- Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:45 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
- Views: 132548
- Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:22 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37181
- Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:00 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
- Views: 132548
I hope this isn't too late to jump in. If it is, then no problem, ignore me :) I wrote these responses before reading everyone's else's. In the box. House fire Grease fire Camp fire Burn victims Fire trucks Out of the box Ring of fire (earthquakes) On fire for the Lord or anything one is passionate ...
- Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:37 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #4: Overusing Exclamation Points
- Replies: 62
- Views: 80113
- Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:23 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #4: Overusing Exclamation Points
- Replies: 62
- Views: 80113
Good Morning Jan! (Juuuuuuuuuuuust kidding) These are two separate passages, from one article I am working on. I'm stumped on them both. “Fire! Our house is on fire. John, Kimberly, wake up!” Not seeing anything unusual, I became irritated and turned toward the two beings. “What is it you want me to...
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:04 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:56 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:46 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
EXTRA CREDIT Currently reading the Mitford Series by, Jan Karon Pretty interesting now that I know what I know. Truth is, sometimes I find myself getting bored when she narrates too much. (I am pretty ignorant in the correct terminology for POV's) ie...MC. I only know that to mean, Master of Ceremon...
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:25 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:23 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
I'm not sure if you wanted to see the corrections or not. Decided to play it safe, and do them. If not, I'll realize that, if you don't respond. :) Corrections in red Okay, got it about the action not being the speech, so don’t use said or said substitute. #1 Rushing through the front door, out of b...
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:26 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:23 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74318
Rushing through the front door, out of breath, John said “You aren’t going to believe what just happened. “Man, there’s a helicopter, three fire trucks and two ambulances down at the river.” Jumping up from her reading chair, Cathy asked, “Do you know what happened?” “A rafter flew out of the raft a...
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:59 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 113773
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:49 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 113773