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by GracefulWarrior
Mon May 24, 2010 8:27 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #13--The Well-Crafted Short Story
Replies: 58
Views: 56713

Good Evening, Here is my homework. Tony walked into the house dripping from the rain. Halfway to the couch he realized he still had his muddy shoes on. His wife yelled at him angrily. Tony entered his house, tossing his drippng umbrella in the corner, then headed for the couch. Suddenly, he heard a ...
by GracefulWarrior
Thu May 13, 2010 8:11 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
Replies: 74
Views: 68731

Awesome! :D

You are a wealth of knowledge. I am learning so much! Now if I can just apply it!

Thanks again Jan, hope you have a wonderful blessed day!

Holly
by GracefulWarrior
Thu May 13, 2010 7:54 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
Replies: 74
Views: 68731

Jan, thanks so much! Is this better? So in articles, it is ok to put thoughts in italics? I guess if you aren't doing a dialogue that would be the way to go? Also, the comma in red, should that be a semi colon or is it ok as a comma? I really wish I paid more attention in english class! I am trying ...
by GracefulWarrior
Thu May 13, 2010 6:25 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
Replies: 74
Views: 68731

Hello, I just saw this lesson, hope I'm not too late to join in :) I didn't get to read any of the others yet, but here is a shot at it. 1. A) Every day I check my email. B) I always use my everyday dishes for meals, but today was special so I put out the china. 2. I don't know as I have anything ne...

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