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by tammies00
Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:46 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 52
Views: 47045

The above is about me on the night my husband came home from Iraq the first time. I was trying to be dramatic with the breathing. It would have been made clear later when the rest of the story is revealed. I think the whole time hubby was deployed I held my breath. I was trying to relay that emotion...
by tammies00
Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:42 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 52
Views: 47045

Hi Here is my attempt at the homework assignment. I have reworked the start of something I wrote a while back. My last breathe was eleven months and two weeks ago, but in a few hours I will finally breathe. Pacing around the dimly lit room, I pull my sweater closer to my chilled body. I only hope th...
by tammies00
Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:06 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Returning to class?
Replies: 1
Views: 2056

I am glad that you are re-starting the classes. I have been reading the previous classes and the replies.

Thanks
Tammie

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