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- Tue Nov 05, 2013 10:55 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be A Better Writer--ALLUSION
- Replies: 32
- Views: 54754
Re: Be A Better Writer--ALLUSION
Hi Jan, I was trying to allude to Eve in the garden of Eden with her giving in to the temptation involving the fruit commonly know as an apple. But with a more happy ending in my story. I was afraid that the way I used it might be too obscure. Thanks, Holly Ah! But in your example, the apple convin...
- Tue Nov 05, 2013 10:27 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be A Better Writer--ALLUSION
- Replies: 32
- Views: 54754
Re: Be A Better Writer--ALLUSION
Hi Jan,
I was trying to allude to Eve in the garden of Eden with her giving in to the temptation involving the fruit commonly know as an apple. But with a more happy ending in my story.
I was afraid that the way I used it might be too obscure.
Thanks,
Holly
I was trying to allude to Eve in the garden of Eden with her giving in to the temptation involving the fruit commonly know as an apple. But with a more happy ending in my story.
I was afraid that the way I used it might be too obscure.
Thanks,
Holly
- Tue Nov 05, 2013 9:58 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be A Better Writer--ALLUSION
- Replies: 32
- Views: 54754
Re: Be A Better Writer--ALLUSION
Hi Jan, Here is an attempt at allusion. Jodi stepped off the scale. Oh no, not another pound. Returning to her desk, she had to pass her co-worker. Edith held out a tin of cookies. "Jodi, Chocolate Chip cookies -- I baked them last night." Jodi picked one up. "The doctor said I need t...
- Tue Oct 29, 2013 9:05 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be a Better Writer--ALLITERATION
- Replies: 32
- Views: 52426
- Tue Oct 29, 2013 5:40 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be a Better Writer--ALLITERATION
- Replies: 32
- Views: 52426
Re: Be a Better Writer--ALLITERATION
Hi Jan, very glad you are doing this again! I don't think I've ever used alliteration. I hadn't really thought about incorporating anything like this into my writing. Can you mix it up and use different letters throughout? Below is my attempt. 1. During our monthly visit to the zoo, we made our way ...
- Thu Sep 23, 2010 10:14 am
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winning Entries for THE INNER PERSON
- Replies: 27
- Views: 26516
woo hoo! I see it, but I don't believe it! I'm on the list! :shock: Congrats everyone who participated in the writing! Sometimes it seems frustrating, but even though I know I got a lot to learn, its great squeaking up little by little in the list. So today, I can say I am very happy to see my name ...
- Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:39 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Beginnings (#1)--the 4th judging criterion
- Replies: 104
- Views: 189589
- Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:53 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #15--WELL-CONSTRUCTED NON-FICTION
- Replies: 46
- Views: 65299
- Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:30 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #15--WELL-CONSTRUCTED NON-FICTION
- Replies: 46
- Views: 65299
Oh shoot! You are right.. I misread it, I have been on a fiction kick lately and I guess that is all I noticed at a quick glance ... the word fiction. But, even so, I did have a friend with a very similar circumstance. Where she lost a job and immediately was blessed with another one. I guess unless...
- Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:37 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #15--WELL-CONSTRUCTED NON-FICTION
- Replies: 46
- Views: 65299
Hi Jan, Here's my shot at the homework. I hope three very short paragraphs are ok, because really if you squeeze them all into one, they would equal a normal size one. :) Tears rolled down her face as she hung the 'Out of Business' sign on her empty store. Why had her prayers gone unanswered? Arrivi...
- Mon Jun 07, 2010 8:51 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #14--THE WELL-CONSTRUCTED POEM
- Replies: 37
- Views: 55861
- Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:39 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #14--THE WELL-CONSTRUCTED POEM
- Replies: 37
- Views: 55861
- Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:02 am
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Ellipses . . .
- Replies: 20
- Views: 34821
- Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:05 am
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Ellipses . . .
- Replies: 20
- Views: 34821
Hello, Here is my elipsis homework. 1. Jeffrey needed to look good. Every detail of his dress, hygiene and hair style had to be perfect. It took him excessive amounts of time in preperation to exit his home. In every way, his appearance to others was excrutiatingly obsessed over. Jeffrey needed to l...
- Mon May 24, 2010 9:07 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #13--The Well-Crafted Short Story
- Replies: 58
- Views: 91933