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- Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:58 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: An In-Depth Look Into The Writer's Emotions
- Replies: 33
- Views: 28747
How ironic that I am reading this thread this morning. On the way home from a horrible night at work... part of me could not wait to see how my entry did...I only had 2 gold boxes by the time I went to work...although I thought the entry was a fairly good one. The other part of me felt a little like...
- Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:28 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--Quatrain
- Replies: 55
- Views: 69310
quatrain times 3
Good morning Jan, Here is my poem...3 quatrains in one poem, for your consideration: Now I lay me down to sleep, THe baby died in six-o- three, And down the hall in six-o-five, A small child fights to stay alive, We daily fight a war of wills, And battle dark, malignant ills, And pray for grace that...
- Tue Dec 01, 2009 10:55 am
- Forum: Page Turner Writing Contest
- Topic: Congratulations to our 2009 Page Turner Winners
- Replies: 32
- Views: 35938
congratulations
Congratulations to Lynda, Shelley and Lisa for your success in the 2009 Page Turner contest. Well done!
- Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:40 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan"s Poetry Class--CLERIHEW
- Replies: 62
- Views: 75644
one more for the road
Barry Manilow
A good singer, don't you know
His very first job really paid
Because he was stuck on a Bandaid
Lisa J.
Moving on now to the next lesson so I can get caught up with the rest of the class. I'm enjoying this very much, by the way.
A good singer, don't you know
His very first job really paid
Because he was stuck on a Bandaid
Lisa J.
Moving on now to the next lesson so I can get caught up with the rest of the class. I'm enjoying this very much, by the way.
- Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:31 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan"s Poetry Class--CLERIHEW
- Replies: 62
- Views: 75644
clerihew # 2
okay...second attempt with someone from old cinema days
Bella Lagosi
His movies were quite gross-y
Made his mark on the world portraying a ghoul
He certainly didn't learn that in school
Lisa J.
Bella Lagosi
His movies were quite gross-y
Made his mark on the world portraying a ghoul
He certainly didn't learn that in school
Lisa J.
- Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:24 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan"s Poetry Class--CLERIHEW
- Replies: 62
- Views: 75644
clerihew-first attempt
I wrote my first one about my hubby who thinks he should be famous, and combined him with some one who really is famous (sort of) Rocky Lynn Johnson His image of self is a big one Fancies himself a wrestler... when in the mirror he's looking Especially when he says the line "do you smell what t...
- Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:50 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
- Replies: 110
- Views: 113949
what... another one???
what now have I done
cannot stop thinking haiku
created monster
seriously, Jan... I'm moving on to the next lesson
Lisa J.
cannot stop thinking haiku
created monster
seriously, Jan... I'm moving on to the next lesson
Lisa J.
- Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:47 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
- Replies: 110
- Views: 113949
another haiku from me to you
little black puppy
red Christmas bow around neck
small boy's new best friend
Lisa J.
red Christmas bow around neck
small boy's new best friend
Lisa J.
- Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:09 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
- Replies: 110
- Views: 113949
haiku #3
tired nurse needs to sleep
too many haiku in head
pillow calls my name
Lisa J.
too many haiku in head
pillow calls my name
Lisa J.
- Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:06 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
- Replies: 110
- Views: 113949
haiku #2
brown seed planted deep
green leaves reach up for the breeze
red flower dances
Lisa J.
green leaves reach up for the breeze
red flower dances
Lisa J.
- Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:58 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
- Replies: 110
- Views: 113949
haiku try
so many mentions
of soft drink preferences
making me thirsty
Lisa J.
of soft drink preferences
making me thirsty
Lisa J.
- Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:33 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class--ACROSTIC
- Replies: 36
- Views: 46910
thank you
Jan,
thank you for the feedback... I can tell already I am going to enjoy the classes very much...
Lisa
thank you for the feedback... I can tell already I am going to enjoy the classes very much...
Lisa
- Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:21 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class--ACROSTIC
- Replies: 36
- Views: 46910
acrostics
Jan, You wanted feedback... I thought this would be easy, but found out it is not as easy as it looks. I really had trouble with getting the last two lines to fit. Anyway, here is another attempt at an acrostic poem. Lisa Gifts from God Reveal hearts of Absolute trust that Notice everything and Dema...
- Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:14 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class--ACROSTIC
- Replies: 36
- Views: 46910
an acrostic for Gerald
Jerry, You know that you have been in my prayers ever since Linda went home to be with the Lord. I was touched by your acrostic, and I am glad you are writing again. I think Linda would be pleased to know there is healing taking place. I hope you don't mind but I've written an acrostic that I hope b...
- Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:13 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class--LIMERICK
- Replies: 75
- Views: 86592