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Congratulations Fellow Faithwriters! I really enjoyed reading some of your stories this week! Have a blessed day!

Gary B.

Congratulations Fellow Faithwriters! Have a blessed day!

Gary B.

Congratulations Fellow Faithwriters! Great job! Have a blessed day!

Gary B.

Thanks Jan! It makes perfect sense as you explain it. Note that I haven't been to any writing school at all; however, I'm currently considering taking the Apprentice course in the Christian Writer's Guild. Until then I guess you can say that I am kind of like a golfer who has learned how to play gol...

Jan, pls note the link to my entry below titled Heart Cry: http://www.faithwriiters.com/wc-article-level3.php?id=27778 As advised from the feedback given, I will remove the unnecessary commas and I will change the following forced rhyme to a slant rhyme as taught in your slant rhyme lesson. The curr...

Jan, in my weekly challenge submission this past week, besides having too many commas, I also had a forced rhyme line that could have been better with a slant rhyme instead. Note that in the draft, I had in fact used a slant rhyme, not knowing it at the time, but changed it to a forced rhyme thinkin...